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Life cycle of silkworm and manufacturing of cloth

Life cycle of silkworm and manufacturing of cloth 6aOKK

The diagram elucidates the biological growth cycle of silkworm, which occur in four various phases and how it is used in the manufacturing of silk clothes. To begin with, moth lay eggs on mulberry leaves, ample of eggs are connected by jelly like substance. After 10 days, the growth starts, simultaneously they feed on leaves. Subsequently, with in 4 to 6 weeks they knit a thread and wraps around their body. Then between 3 and 8 days full developed cocoon is ready and utilize in the formation of silk clothes. Furthermore if development continues it become a moth. With regard to, manufacturing of silk cocoon are chosen and then they are placed in hot water for fractions of time. Moreover, they are transform into a 300-900 m long thread. The penultimate step is to rotate it and placed in colorful dye or prior to this it can undergo into weaving. In the end a beautiful colour cloth is ready

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used
 in the manufacturing of silk clothes.

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begin
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leaves
, ample of eggs are connected
 by jelly like substance. After 10 days, the growth This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
, simultaneously
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leaves
. Subsequently
, with in 4 to 6 weeks they knit a thread and wraps around their body. Then between 3 and 8 days full developed cocoon is ready and utilize in the formation of silk clothes. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
 if development continues it become a moth. With regard to, manufacturing of silk cocoon are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).chosen, and
chosen and
 then they are placed
 in hot water for fractions of time. Moreover
, they are Consider using a past participle here: "transformed".transformed
transform
 into a 300-900 m long thread. The penultimate step is to rotate it and placed in colorful dye or prior to this it can undergo into weaving. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
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colour
 cloth is Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphready.ready!ready?ready:ready,ready;
ready