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Languages that high school students speak at home

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The table shows the data about the languages that students in high school speak at home in a school district in the USA from 2008 to 2014. In general, the number of students speaking languages at home tends to increase. To begin, we can see Spanish was the language which interested the most students. After 6 years, the number of students who spoke Spanish had increased nearly half of 2008. In addition, Nepalese is one of the few languages spoken and it had started with the fewest number of students with only 95 pupils, after that had risen appropriately 5 times than before. Besides that, some languages had a downtrend and some of this can be mentioned as Korean, Vietnamese and Polish. Unlike Korean or Vietnamese can interest a lot of students at the beginning, Polish just had 110 pupils prefer to speak at home in 2008 and it continued dropping to 82 people.
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in high school speak at home in a school district in the USA from 2008 to 2014.
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, the number of
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languages
at home tends to increase.

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Spanish was the
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language
which interested the most
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students
. After 6 years, the number of
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students
who spoke Spanish had increased
nearly
half of 2008.
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, Nepalese is one of the few
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languages
spoken and it had
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with the fewest number of
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students
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95 pupils, after that had risen
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at the beginning, Polish
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had 110 pupils prefer to speak at home in 2008 and it continued dropping to 82
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IELTS academic Languages that high school students speak at home

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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