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The diagram shows what Antrhropology students who graduate one university did after finishing all undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. one category occupies half of all and the account of the others categories are very small. There are six category in the diagram also there are three types and separates four parts in the table. In the graph, There are six category, Full-time work, Part-time work, Unemployed, Full-time postgrad study, Part-time work+ postgrad study and Not known. The most category is Full-time work and it is 52%. Second biggest is Part-time work and 15%. Third biggest is Unemployed and 12%. The category of 8% has two, Full-time postgrad study, Not know. From there, a number of Anthropology students some condition's work even study after graduate university. In the table, it is written jobs that Antrhropology graduates often get, Freelance consultants, Government sector and Private companies. The 50% of people who are Government sector gets money more than $100000. It is the most account in this job. However, the most number of people get $75000-99999 in Freelance consultants. Also, the people who get $50000-74999 are the most in Private company. Therefore, Government sector is the most job that Antrhropology graduates can get money in three jobs.
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the salaries of the anthropologists in
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