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It is clear that six science-related disciplines are studied by research male and female researchers who were studying at a United Kingdom university in 20009.

It is clear that six science-related disciplines are studied by research male and female researchers who were studying at a United Kingdom university in 20009. APg9X
It is clear that six science-related disciplines are studied by research male and female researchers who were studying at a United Kingdom university in 20009. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that students of both genders who studied research biology were the most popular, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the graph are for veterinary medicine, but this subject also saw the only subject decrease for men. It is evident that five in six science-related subjects which are researched by boy students accounted for the highest students. Therefore, the number of students who consulted biology had reached a peak at approximately 250 men and 200 women. By contrast, veterinary medicine was only research for around 90 for men and 110 for women. In terms of the number of students who explored astronomy, geology and medicine. The amount of male who studied astronomy, geology and medicine took into consideration 150, 150 and 200 students respectively. Moreover, the number of females who studied the same accounted for 60, 75 and 175 students respectively.
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were studying at a United Kingdom university in 20009.

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accounted for the highest
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consulted biology had reached a peak at approximately 250
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was
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research for around 90 for
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explored astronomy, geology and
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medicine
. The amount of male
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astronomy, geology and
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took into consideration 150, 150 and 200
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students
respectively
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, the number of females
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the same accounted for 60, 75 and 175
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IELTS academic It is clear that six science-related disciplines are studied by research male and female researchers who were studying at a United Kingdom university in 20009.

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