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Island Maps before and after

Island Maps before and after L3aVV
Both maps present how the island was developed for tourism over time. The island is around 250 meters long which is surrounded by the ocean. The development of the island has been huge with many facilities added over time The island initially was an empty land with a substantial number of trees to the east. Over time, many new developments were made. New facilities were constructed on the island. Accommodation is plenty with the erection of 6 buildings to the west of the island and a further 9 more been added to the easter side of the island. In the middle, a reception and a delicious restaurant are also built with footpaths and vehicle tracks to connect to the buildings. The coastline has also seen some significant changes over time with the construction of a pier where small boats are housed. Towards the western region, there is a beautiful beach where people can go out for a swim have a wonderful time.
Both maps present how the
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was developed
for tourism
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over
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The
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island
is around 250 meters long which
is surrounded
by the ocean. The development of the
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island
has been huge with
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many
facilities
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added
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over
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time


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The
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island
initially
was an empty land with a substantial number of trees to the east.
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Over
time,
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many
new developments
were made
. New facilities
were constructed
on the
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island
. Accommodation is
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plenty
with the erection of 6 buildings to the west of the
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island
and a
further
9 more been
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added
to the easter side of the
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island
. In the middle, a reception and a delicious restaurant are
also
built with footpaths and vehicle
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tracks
to connect to the buildings.

The coastline has
also
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seen
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some
significant
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changes
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over
time with the construction of a pier where
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small
boats
are housed
. Towards the western region, there is a
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beautiful
beach where
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people
can go out for a swim have a wonderful time.

IELTS academic Island Maps before and after

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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