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The bar chart illustrates, how many students studying in which department in 2005.

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The bar chart illustrates, how many students studying in which department in 2005. Charts has 6 different departments as linguistic, psychology, natural sciences, engineering, programming and mathematics. Research's main goal is to find out about which gender usually prefers to study which department. Overall, totally there are male students more than female students for studying in these entire department. Male students are mostly prefers to mathematics, programming and engineering departments for studying. Contrastly female students are prefers to linguistics department. Natural sciences has obviously equal number of students about genders. Finally, there are more male students amount of around 50 than female students. In terms of mathematics department that is the most selected department from male students although that is the least selected department bu female students. In contrast natural science department is most selected department from both gender students. Consequently there is no department to most selected from females than male students.
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as linguistic, psychology, natural sciences, engineering, programming and mathematics. Research's main goal is to find out about which gender
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are prefers to linguistics
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. Natural sciences has
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amount of around 50 than
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In terms of mathematics
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