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Population between two countries

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The line graph illustrates the India's and China's population growth. The source for these information are taken from UN population-medium variant. The numbers are measured in billions. The population growth for India and China was initially 1 grand and approximately 1250 respectively in the year 2000. The population in India had gradual increase throughout the retrospect, while for China the population started to fall around in 2035. The inhabitants remained constant ( more than 1400) for both the countries in the year 2030. The survey was calculated for every decade and it is predicted to be slightly lower than 1600 for India and 1400 for China in 2050. Overall, the anticipation on the population for China are less when compared to India in the end of 2050.

The line graph illustrates the India's and China's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 growth. The source for these information are taken
 from UN population-medium variant. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 numbers are measured
 in billions.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 growth for India and China was initially
 1 grand and approximately 1250 respectively
 in the year 2000. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 in India had gradual increase throughout the retrospect, while for China the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to fall around in 2035.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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more than 1400) for both the countries in the year 2030. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 survey was calculated
 for every decade and it is predicted
 to be slightly
 lower than 1600 for India and 1400 for China in 2050.

Overall
, the anticipation on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 for China are less when compared to India in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2050. 