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The liner graph illustrates the figure of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city

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The liner graph illustrates the figure of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city between January and June in 2011. Overall, the number of enquiries received by the letter or email witnessed a slight decrease, while there was a significant increase in the amount of enquires received by the site and via telephone. The figure of the site inquired started at just over 400 queries in January, after significant rise to 1900 queries in June. Despite a higher starting point, with 900 enquiries which doubled the number of inquiries in person, the volume of telephone experienced an upward trend, with 1600 inquiries in June. In contrast, the figure of enquiries by the letter or email stood at nearly 800, then a gradual drop of 200 queries in six months.
The liner graph illustrates the figure of inquiries
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sent
to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city between January and June in 2011.
Overall
, the number of
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enquiries
received by the letter or email witnessed a slight decrease, while there was a significant increase in the amount of
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enquires
received by the site and via telephone.

The figure of the site
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inquired
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at
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over 400 queries in January, after significant rise to 1900 queries in June. Despite a higher starting point, with 900
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enquiries
which doubled the number of inquiries in person, the volume of telephone experienced an upward trend, with 1600 inquiries in June.

In contrast
, the figure of
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enquiries
by the letter or email stood at
nearly
800, then a gradual drop of 200 queries in six months.
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