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information about the underground railway systems in six cities. write anything

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The table gives some data about the metro train systems in 6 countries, Also this table shows the date opened, km and passengers each year. Overall, the latest time opened belonged Los Angeles, nevertheless the least number belonged to Kyota both km and passengers. In addition, passengers' high rate number happened in Tokyo, while the earliest time occurred in Paris. Finally, the longest was in Paris. Firstly, Paris railways systems were opened in 1900 the earliest than the others. In contrast, the latest became in Lon Angeles in 2001. The pointer of Kyota and Los Angeles was relatively similar to each other, however the least equalled to 45million in Kyota. Only Los Angeles railway systems were established in 21 century than the others. On the one hand, most of the passenger number was pointed out in Tokyo with 1927 million, on top of that the closer index was 1191 million passengers in Paris. Another factor, the minimum length of the route was 11 km in Kyota.
The table gives
some
data about the metro train systems in 6 countries,
Also
this table
shows
the date opened, km and
passengers
each year.

Overall
, the latest time opened belonged Los Angeles,
nevertheless
the least number belonged to
Kyota
both km and
passengers
.
In addition
, passengers' high rate number happened in Tokyo, while the earliest time occurred in Paris.
Finally
, the longest was in Paris.

Firstly
, Paris railways systems
were opened
in 1900 the
earliest
than the others.
In contrast
, the latest became in Lon Angeles in 2001. The pointer of
Kyota
and Los Angeles was
relatively
similar to each other,
however
the least equalled to 45million in
Kyota
.
Only
Los Angeles railway systems
were established
in
21 century
than the others.

On the one hand, most of the
passenger
number
was pointed
out in Tokyo with 1927 million,
on top of that
the closer index was 1191 million
passengers
in Paris. Another factor, the minimum length of the route was 11 km in
Kyota
.
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IELTS academic information about the underground railway systems in six cities. write anything

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