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he tables below show the number of interpreting (oral) and translating (written) jobs done by a company in New South Wales for four languages in the years 1998, 1999 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he tables below show the number of interpreting (oral) and translating (written) jobs done by a company in New South Wales for four languages in the years 1998, 1999 and 2000. aAeAw
This chart illustrates the services provided by enterprise in New South Wales for last three years of 20th century, concerning different languages interpretation and translation. Overall, from 1998 to 2000, interpretation tasks decreased in total, while translation assignments increased for the company. Interpretation jobs are around three times more than translation assignments. An analysis of the data demonstrates that, between 1998 to 2000, the Arabic and Vietnamese oral assignments were declined, however, more demand was observed with respect to translation jobs. The company's main work is related to interpretation, as they have performed 20, 697 assignments. Spanish and German are least in demand languages, as far as the oral jobs are considered. On the other hand, they have completed 7, 933 written jobs starting from 1998 to 2000. Approximately half of jobs were related to Arabic, while spanish being second most in demand. It is noticeable that both spanish and vietnamese languages shows no significant increase over the time.
This chart illustrates the services provided by enterprise in New South Wales for last three years of 20th century, concerning
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tasks decreased in total, while translation assignments increased for the
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are around three times more than translation assignments.

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between 1998 to 2000
, the Arabic and Vietnamese oral assignments
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,
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with respect to translation
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. The
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company
's main work
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interpretation
, as they have performed 20, 697 assignments. Spanish and German are least in demand languages, as far as the oral
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jobs
are considered
.

On the other hand
, they have completed 7, 933 written
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starting from 1998 to 2000. Approximately half of
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were related
to Arabic, while
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spanish
being second most in demand. It is noticeable that both
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IELTS academic he tables below show the number of interpreting (oral) and translating (written) jobs done by a company in New South Wales for four languages in the years 1998, 1999 and 2000.

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