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Indian students going abroad for higher studies to different countries (2005).

Indian students going abroad for higher studies to different countries (2005). leeBX

The pie chart illustrates the percentage of Indian students were selected different nations for the further education in the 2005 in Canada, Australia, Newzealand, USA, UK respectively. At afleeting glance, it is immensely clear that in the year of 2005, Canada (29% ) closely followed by Australia (27%)in case of Indian students, who entered in these countries for their education. USA(7%) attracted almost one third in comparison with the proportion of students reached Newzealand (21%). Further scrutinising the pie chart, Cyprus and Poland were the choice of almost equal proportion of students: however, UK(9%)was three times the more than the Cyprus, which was demanded by only 3%indian students. To sum up, it can be inferred from the graph that Indian students liked to go to different countries for their further education but Canada and Australia were the most popular among them whereas the lower percentage of Indian students were interested in Cyprus.

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