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The bar chart shows the results of marketing research on the top sold goods in one supermarket in December 2010.

The bar chart shows the results of marketing research on the top sold goods in one supermarket in December 2010. leA51
The bar chart illustrates the data about the outcomes of shopping which the research was carried out in the best seller products of supermarket in December. Overall, what stands out from the diagram, there were two main groups: food and clothes and the former was larger of the two. In the first group, Bread was the most purchased food by individuals around 100% and chocolate was next at 93%. Other product juice was mentioned by 75%, alcohol drdein and sweets were cited over two thirds in the sample. Meat( poultry incl), coffee and beverages at 60% ( both meat and coffee) and 50% respectively. Tea was sold in 30 percent. As for clothing, evening Dresses and Suit and Shoes were the higher in this category citing under a sixty percent and Shirts, Blouses were less than a third. The lowest in this group is Jewelery which was bought by minority of people.
The bar chart illustrates the data about the outcomes of shopping which the research
was carried
out in the
best seller
products of supermarket in December.

Overall
, what stands out from the diagram, there were two main groups: food and clothes and the former was larger of the two.

In the
first
group, Bread was the most
purchased
food by individuals around 100% and chocolate was
next
at 93%. Other product juice
was mentioned
by 75%, alcohol
drdein
and sweets
were cited
over two thirds in the sample. Meat
(
poultry incl), coffee and beverages at 60%
(
both meat and coffee) and 50%
respectively
. Tea
was sold
in 30 percent.

As for clothing, evening Dresses and Suit and Shoes were the higher in this category citing under a sixty percent and Shirts, Blouses were less than a third. The lowest in this group is
Jewelery
which was
bought
by minority of
people
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the results of marketing research on the top sold goods in one supermarket in December 2010.

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152 words
6.0
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