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The diagrams illustrate how a simple solar panel is structured and used.

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The diagrams illustrate how a simple solar panel is structured and used. Overall, the whole procedure consists of only glass, pipes, and a base. In addition, the diagrams also describe how the panel is used to produce either warm air or warm water. The diagram commences with the top diagram shows the square or rectangular shape of the solar panel. A sheet of transparent glass is used to form the top. An inlet pipe is located on the left side of the base, and there is an outlet pipe on the right side. The lower diagrams illustrate how the solar panel functions. The diagram on the left shows that air enters the panel through the inlet pipe. This air is then warmed by the rays of the sun passing through the transparent glass and it exits via the outlet pipe. Besides that, the diagram on the right shows how the panel is used when water enters through the inlet pipe. The pipe then continues in a kind of “S” shape, allowing heat from the sun’s rays to raise the temperature of the water as much as possible, before the warm water finally passes out of the panel through the outlet pipe.
The diagrams illustrate how a simple solar
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is structured
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.

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, the whole procedure consists of
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only
glass,
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pipes
, and a base.
In addition
, the diagrams
also
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describe
how the
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panel
is
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used
to produce either warm air or warm water.

The diagram commences with the top diagram
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shows
the square or rectangular shape of the solar
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panel
. A sheet of transparent glass is
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used
to form the top. An inlet
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pipe
is located
on the
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left
side of the base, and there is an outlet
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pipe
on the right side.

The lower diagrams illustrate how the solar
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panel
functions. The diagram on the
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left
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shows
that air enters the
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panel
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through
the inlet
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pipe
. This air is then warmed by the rays of the sun passing
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through
the transparent glass and it exits via the outlet
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pipe
.
Besides
that, the diagram on the right
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shows
how the
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panel
is
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used
when water enters
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through
the inlet
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pipe
. The
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pipe
then continues in a kind of “S” shape, allowing heat from the sun’s rays to raise the temperature of the water as much as possible,
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before
the warm water
finally
passes out of the
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panel
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through
the outlet
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pipe
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams illustrate how a simple solar panel is structured and used.

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