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In comparison with the national rate, it is reported that the percentage of staffs working in technical field in the whole country are much higher than in town Ashby ( 17 percent for the former and 9 percent for the latter). The data of construction workers in Britain was the same as the national unemployed rate that both stood at one-tenth.

In comparison with the national rate, it is reported that the percentage of staffs working in technical field in the whole country are much higher than in town Ashby ( 17 percent for the former and 9 percent for the latter). The data of construction workers in Britain was the same as the national unemployed rate that both stood at one-tenth. J0k2B

Two pie graphs illustrate the employment status of residents who aged between 23 and 65 years old in Ashby and in the UK as a whole in the year 2008. At the first glance, it can be observed that the rate of unemployment in Ashby was higher than the national average rate. To begin with, personal service was the most appealing occupations to Ashby residents, at 21%, closely followed by office work with 18%. In contrast, technical and professional workers accounted for the second lowest and the lowest with 1 percent gap between two figures. There are also 14 out of 100 people in Ashby who were thrown out of work. In comparison with the national rate, it is reported that the percentage of staffs working in technical field in the whole country are much higher than in town Ashby ( 17 percent for the former and 9 percent for the latter). The data of construction workers in Britain was the same as the national unemployed rate that both stood at one-tenth. 172

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