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IELTS Writing Part One - Describe a Map

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The two maps illustrate changes to Colwick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. We can see that the major change to this centre was the development of the outdoor landscape. In the past, there was a wasteland outside the centre. During this period, it was spectacularly transformed into an exhibition and performance area with a stage surrounded by seating areas and plenty of lively trees. A central exhibition area was built in the middle of the arts centre. The two galleries were merged into one and moved to the left of the central area. A new cafe is constructed next to the gallery in the place of an old toilet. It was relocated to the bottom right-hand corner and in addition, it decreased in size. In the past, the concert mall and cinema were in one building; however, now they are separated into two distinct blocks and relocated to the top right-hand corner of the centre. What is more, the art centre also developed a new drama studio opposite the cinema. Finally, the information desk still stayed unchanged throughout the years. In conclusion, it is clear that the Colwick Arts Centre has undergone significant changes and expanded during this period.
The two maps illustrate
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changes
to Colwick
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Arts
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Centre
between 2005 and
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today
.

We can
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see
that the major
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change
to this
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centre
was the development of the outdoor landscape. In the past, there was a wasteland outside the
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centre
. During this period, it was
spectacularly
transformed into an exhibition and performance
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area
with a stage surrounded by seating
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areas
and
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plenty
of lively trees.

A central exhibition
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area
was built
in the middle of the
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arts
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centre
. The two galleries
were merged
into one and
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moved
to the
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left
of the central
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area
. A new
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cafe
is constructed
next
to the gallery in the place of an
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old
toilet. It
was relocated
to the bottom right-hand corner and
in addition
, it decreased in size. In the past, the concert mall and cinema were in one building;
however
,
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now
they
are separated
into two distinct blocks and relocated to the top right-hand corner of the
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centre
.
What is more
, the
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art
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centre
also
developed a new drama studio opposite the cinema.
Finally
, the information desk
still
stayed unchanged throughout the years.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that the Colwick
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Arts
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Centre
has undergone significant
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changes
and expanded during this period.
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IELTS academic IELTS Writing Part One - Describe a Map

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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