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In an accelerating pace of modernization these days, one of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various citizens is about telecommuting

In an accelerating pace of modernization these days, one of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various citizens is about telecommuting K3lJ3
In an accelerating pace of modernization these days, one of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various citizens is about telecommuting. It is highly likely that there has been an exponential rate of bosses suggesting employees working remotely, which enables workers to possess flextime. From my perspective, this aforementioned trend is patently positive on account of the advantages that have been bringing to human life.
In an accelerating pace of modernization these days, one of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various citizens is about telecommuting. It is
highly
likely that there has been an exponential rate of bosses suggesting employees working
remotely
, which enables workers to possess flextime. From my perspective, this aforementioned trend is
patently
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
on account of the advantages that have been bringing to human life.
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IELTS academic In an accelerating pace of modernization these days, one of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various citizens is about telecommuting

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