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how the hydro-electric power is generated

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing hydro-electric power generation in schools, hospitals, factories and houses. Overall, the seawater serves as the main source of electricity, as it undergo different stages before providing power in various establishments. In the first stage, the saltwater is subjected to the process of evaporation, caused by the sun’s heat. This is then converted into rain that will eventually be stored in the reservoir, being controlled by the dam. Then, the collected water will pass through a valve that could open and close, transporting the products into the turbine. The water in this stage could be transferred in two ways, mainly in the pump that leads back to the reservoir or over the high voltage cables, leading to the transformer station. Lastly, this will then pass through the underground cables, responsible to distribute the hydro-electric power in the hospitals, schools, factories and residential areas.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing hydro-electric power generation in schools, hospitals, factories and
houses
.
Overall
, the seawater serves as the main source of electricity, as it undergo
different
stages
before
providing power in various establishments.

In the
first
stage, the saltwater
is subjected
to the process of evaporation, caused by the sun’s heat. This is then converted into rain that will
eventually
be stored
in the reservoir,
being controlled
by the dam. Then, the collected water will pass through a valve that could open and close, transporting the products into the turbine.

The water in this stage could
be transferred
in two ways,
mainly
in the pump that leads back to the reservoir or over the high voltage cables, leading to the transformer station.
Lastly
, this will then pass through the underground cables, responsible to distribute the hydro-electric power in the hospitals, schools, factories and residential areas.
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IELTS academic how the hydro-electric power is generated

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