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how many movies of different genres were made on Netflix

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The pie chart illustrates how many movies of different genres were made on Netflix. It is clearly that Documentary genre had the most films with 31% - revealing a global thirst for knowledge. With the number of films is only half that of documentaries, drama was ranked second with 16%. The percentages of thriller, romance and the other genres were pretty much the same. The audiences are quite fond of comedy and romance, comedy bring joy to the viewer while romantic movies can heal their soul. On the other hand, horror movies and crime movies seem unpopular for everyone. For example, if we have 100 movies, there is only 2 out of 100 movies are horror movies.
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IELTS academic how many movies of different genres were made on Netflix

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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