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How Dangerous Products are Dealt with in Three Countries

How Dangerous Products are Dealt with in Three Countries oExL3
The given pie charts illustrate how risky products are handled by three different countries. Overall, we can see that underground is the most popular way to negotiate the waste products whereas incineration is an unnotable style. Looking into the details, recycling is the most trendy way to deal with waste products in the Republic of Korea accounting for 69% of the pie chart whereas in Sweden we can see the marginal decline in recycling which covers almost half of Korea contributing 28%but when it's time for the United kingdom, the recycling process has been erasing and adding the dumping at sea which covers only 8%. On the other hand, we can observe the sharp growth in the underground from 22%in Korea to 55% in Sweden, following the skyrocketing trend Uk covers a significant proportion of the pie chart. However, incineration is an infamous way in Korea to deal with harmful products contributing 9% but in Sweden, we can see the rising trend which contributes 20% which is double of Korea however in the Uk, we can notice the astronomic sink in incineration accounting insignificant proportion of pie chart. Moreover, chemical treatment only 8% in the UK which is not followed by other countries.
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whereas in Sweden we can
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the marginal decline in recycling which covers almost half of Korea contributing 28%
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IELTS academic How Dangerous Products are Dealt with in Three Countries

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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