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The graph shows the changing level of smoking per 1, 000 people by gender which are male and female in Southland over a 40-year period.

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The graph shows the changing level of smoking per 1, 000 people by gender which are male and female in Southland over a 40-year period. Generally speaking, rates of smoking decreased in the levels of male, and a more in levelling off from female whose the rates were increasing in prior to these. Looking first at declining rates smoked by male from 1960 -2000, it can be seen that levels declined dramatically. To be more exact, male rates fell down approximately 350 people. Combined with these smoking by female levels, while rising throughout from 1970 to 1975, the five year of a period, reduced in the final 20 years. More precisely, compared the highest rate in 1975 to the lowest rate in 1960, these were roughly 300 and 100 people, respectively. In conclusion, the level of smoking by male in Southland declined almost a similar rate by female around 200 – 250 people in 2000.

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