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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of urban and rural households in a certain nation that had internet access from 2011 to 2016. Overall, household internet access in urban showed an upward trend as compared to rural household. It is lucid that, household internet access in rural and urban was least in 2011. After that, in 2012 household internet access in urban was rose to 30 percent and declined to 12 % in rural. Whereas, household internet access in rural was significantly surged to 10 percent in 2013. Additionally, in 2013 household internet access in suburban showed a rapid surge in 2013. It was nearby 40 %. Shifting attention towards remaining information, in 2014 household internet access in suburban was considerably rose to 50 percent in 2014 and fell to 15 percent in rural. However, household internet access in rural was inclined through out the period, but it showed a highest percentage in 2016 which was 35 percent approximately. To add on, in 2014 and 2015 household internet access in urban showed a difference of 2 percent. It was around 50 % in 2014 and 52% in 2015 respectively.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of
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and
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households
in a certain nation that had internet
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access
from 2011 to 2016.
Overall
,
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household
internet
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access
in
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urban
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showed
an upward trend as compared to
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rural
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household
. It is lucid that,
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household
internet
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access
in
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rural
and
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urban
was least in 2011. After that, in 2012
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internet
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access
in
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urban
was rose to 30
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and declined to 12 % in
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rural
.
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,
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internet
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in
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was
significantly
surged to 10
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percent
in 2013.
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, in 2013
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internet
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access
in suburban
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showed
a rapid surge in 2013. It was nearby 40 %. Shifting attention towards remaining information, in 2014
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internet
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in suburban was
considerably
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rose
to 50
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percent
in 2014 and fell to 15
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in
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rural
.
However
,
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internet
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access
in
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was inclined
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showed
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a
highest percentage in 2016 which was 35
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approximately. To
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on, in 2014 and 2015
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internet
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in
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urban
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showed
a difference of 2
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. It was around 50 % in 2014 and 52% in 2015
respectively
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IELTS academic household internet access

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
189 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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