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information about the stages and materials used in the cement-making process, and how cements is used to produce concrete for building purpose.

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The diagram provides information about the stages and materials used in the cement-making process, and how cements is used to produce concrete for building purpose. Overall, the diagram make it clear that there are 4 stages in the process of making Cement production In the meantime, only 4 steps are required to produce Concrete production. In addition we can see they has different ingredients and process. At the beginning of the process of creating Cement production are put limestone and clay in to the crusher. Then, bring powder from crusher lead to mixer. From these, put mixer bring to rotating heater tube and fill heat to grinder. At the final stage, cement is obtained from the grinder and packed to bags. The first step in the process of creating Concrete production. Is merging different materials Concrete production of The First step sand about 25 percentage, cement about 15 percentage, water about 10 percentage and gravel about 50 percentage. At the last step, put all materials in to the concrete mixer.
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IELTS academic information about the stages and materials used in the cement-making process, and how cements is used to produce concrete for building purpose.

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170 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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