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he table below shows the percentages of individuals under the age of 18 and over 60 in California, Utah, and Florida, as well as their average annual income and impoverished population.

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The table given illustrates how many people aged under 18 and beyond 60 in California, Utah and Florida, along with their average yearly income and poverty population. Overall, the country which has the highest percentage of older individuals is Florida whereas, Utal has more young people than other countries. Besides, the residents of Floria and California possessing greater avenue, show a higher proportion of population living in poverty than Utal. Utal takes the lead in the quantity of people under age of 18 with 28%, followed by California and Florida with the virtually the same figures. Conversely, the residents aged over 60 show higher percentage in Florida with 23% and this figure is almost triple the proportion of elderly people in Utal (8%). The most interesting phenomenon which could be noticed from the table is that despite having the greatest average annual emolument per person (23, 000) compared to the two remaining countries, California takes the first in the percentage of impoverished population with 18%, which is substantial higher than Utal and Florida.
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aged under 18 and beyond 60 in California, Utah and Florida, along with their average yearly income and poverty population.

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IELTS academic he table below shows the percentages of individuals under the age of 18 and over 60 in California, Utah, and Florida, as well as their average annual income and impoverished population.

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