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Presented is the flow chart illustrating the process by which tea is produced. From an overall perspective, it is evident that there are 6 steps involved in the process, consolidated in 5 larger groups according to the ways tea manufactured, commencing with choosing fresh tea leaves and culminating in having them fired or dried. The first stage is when the tea’s bug or 2 top leaves are picked in order to ensure that the quality is good. Following that is the withering stage in which air would pass through leaves on rack. In the subsequent step, after 60% moisture is out, this immediate product is placed into 2 separate processes to produce 2 different final tea products. On the one hand, by traditional method making tea leaves to be loose, these leaves are rolled flat in order that enzymes can be released. On the other hand, with modern method to make tea bags, tea leaves are cut, torn and then curled. It is a quick process with smaller granular pieces created. The following stages are oxidation and fermentation which let rolled leaves spread on tiles or cement. With the combination of enzymes and airs, leaves turn into copper color. The process ends with firing and drying theses leaves on oven or hot air dryers, when flavor and aroma are released and totally, there’s 97% moisture out.
Presented is the flow chart illustrating the
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process
by which
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tea
is produced
.

From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that there are 6 steps involved in the
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process
, consolidated in 5 larger groups according to the
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ways
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tea
manufactured, commencing with choosing fresh
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tea
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leaves
and culminating in having them fired or dried.

The
first
stage is when the
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tea’s
bug or 2 top
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leaves
are picked
in order to ensure that the quality is
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good
. Following
that is
the withering stage in which air would pass through
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leaves
on rack. In the subsequent step, after 60% moisture is out, this immediate product
is placed
into 2 separate
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processes
to produce 2
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different
final
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tea
products.

On the one hand, by traditional method making
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tea
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leaves
to be loose, these
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leaves
are rolled
flat in order that enzymes can
be released
.
On the other hand
, with modern method to
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make
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tea
bags,
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tea
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leaves
are
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cut
, torn and then curled. It is a quick
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process
with smaller granular pieces created. The following stages are oxidation and fermentation which
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let
rolled
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leaves
spread on tiles or cement. With the combination of enzymes and airs,
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leaves
turn into copper color. The
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process
ends with firing and drying
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theses
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leaves
on oven or hot air dryers, when flavor and aroma
are released
and
totally
, there’s 97% moisture out.
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IELTS academic process of manufacturing green tea

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4 paragraphs
226 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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