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he line graph illustrates the growth of the economy at 5-year intervals from 1995 to 2010. The pie charts show the breakdown of household expenditure over the same period.

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The line graph illustrates the growth of the economy at 5-year intervals from 1995 to 2010. The pie charts show the breakdown of household expenditure over the same period. Seen together, there appears to a relation between economic growth and household expenditure. The chart shows that economic growth began with a modest 1 percent. Since 1995, the growth remained stable and peaked at nearly 5 percent in 2005. But it dropped dramatically to -5 percent in 2008 and increased sharply thereafter. At the same time, changes of pattern of spending were evident. In those intervals when there was low or negative growth, people spent more on things that are important such as housing and food. However, in periods of economic growth, those things less essential namely clothing, entertainment and travel are spent more than in other periods. For example, in 2005, when the economic growth peaked, three items together accounted for about 20 percent of total spending. In conclusion, the figures show that the economic growth appears to cause the household expenditure.
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of the economy at 5-year intervals from 1995 to 2010. The pie charts
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the breakdown of household expenditure over the same period.
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together, there appears to a relation between
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economic
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and household expenditure.

The chart
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that
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began with a modest 1
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. Since 1995, the
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remained stable and peaked at
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5
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in 2005.
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it dropped
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in 2008 and increased
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of pattern of spending were evident. In those intervals when there was low or
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negative
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,
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people
spent more on things that are
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important
such as housing and food.
However
, in periods of
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economic
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growth
, those things less essential
namely
clothing, entertainment and travel
are spent
more than in other periods.
For example
, in 2005, when the
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peaked, three items together accounted for about 20
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of total spending.

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, the figures
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that the
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appears to cause the household expenditure.
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IELTS academic he line graph illustrates the growth of the economy at 5-year intervals from 1995 to 2010. The pie charts show the breakdown of household expenditure over the same period.

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