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he graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

he graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. 78X3
The supplied line graph represents the differences of the wage among three types of graduate employees which are within a degree, a higher degree and other qualifications in 2002. As is observed, the money earned by people who had a first degree and a higher degree generally followed an upward trend. Those with others, however, had a dramatic increase from 21 to 40 years old and gradually declined after that period. A striking point is that at the period of 21 to 40 years old, the employees with other qualifications earned much money per week than the others. Their highest salary was beyond 800 pounds while that of postgraduates and graduates was approximately 700 pounds. Thereafter, the earning of people having other qualifications went down slowly to just under 700 pounds at the age between 56 and 60. Between 36 and 45, the amount earned by postgraduates continued to rise from 700 to above 750 pounds. However, that of people with first degree remained unchanged after rising for a long time. From 41 to 60, both of two types had significant fluctuations. The amount of people with higher degree slightly declined at the age group of 41 to 55 then climbed moderately to just below 800 pounds. Salary of those with first degree also had a fall in the 41 to 50 group and increased again after that period, which was up to 700 pounds.
The supplied line graph represents the differences of the wage among three types of graduate employees which are within a
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qualifications in 2002.

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degree
generally
followed an upward trend. Those with others,
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, had a dramatic increase from 21 to 40 years
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and
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declined after that period.

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, the employees with
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other
qualifications earned much money per week than the others. Their highest salary was beyond
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800 pounds
while that of postgraduates and graduates was approximately
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700 pounds
. Thereafter, the earning of
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people
having
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other
qualifications went down
slowly
to
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under
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700 pounds
at the age between 56 and 60.

Between 36 and 45, the amount earned by postgraduates continued to rise from 700 to above
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750 pounds
.
However
, that of
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people
with
first
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degree
remained unchanged after rising for a long time. From 41 to 60, both of two types had significant fluctuations. The amount of
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people
with higher
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degree
slightly
declined at the age group of 41 to 55 then climbed
moderately
to
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just
below
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800 pounds
. Salary of those with
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degree
also
had a fall in the 41 to 50 group and increased again after that period, which was up to
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700 pounds
.
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IELTS academic he graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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