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Outside food and home food comparison

Outside food and home food comparison VQKM3

The pie chauts illustrates the data of average family expenditure on restaurant foods from 1970 to 200 while line graph shows the comparision between fast food meals and sitdown restaurant foods. The data is calibrated in percentage. To begin, in 1970 people spent only ten percente on restaurant food while 90% individuals liked to eat home-cooked food. After a decade, people expenses on outside meals shot up to fifteen percentage. Mostly half expenditure made on home food and half on outsider meals over two decades. Just look at line graph in which number of meals of fast food sharply raised from 20% to 90% over fourty years. On other hand own sit-down restaurant meals were twenty percente in 1970. This figure slightly climbed up to one half in 2000. To sum up all above, it can be seen that restaurant meals go up as compared to home food. Mostly individual prefer to fast food meals more.

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