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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE MAN MORE SOCIAL. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION

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Nowadays it commonly believed that new technology is helping people to socialise more. In my opinion, although new technology made communication easy, increase the perception of being closer, it also decreases the ability to engage in human relationship and be able to have proper communication. The advent of communication technologies such as WhatsApp or new social media such us Facebook or Instagram, in modern time have dramatically increased the opportunity to communicate with our connections independently by their geographical locations. This have allowed people to be in touch with friend or relatives located all over the world and reconnect people that have been separated in their childhood. This is why majority think that humans are now more social than ever before. On the other hand, this phenomenon has reduced human contact almost to none, it is everyday more common to see people sit at the same table staring at their phone and not having any kind of interaction, as fast as we became able to communicate with people on the other side of the world, we are losing the ability to create relationship with the very next one. Eventually even kids rather to play online instead of the neighbourhood playground. In conclusion, despite the fact that communication technology improvement is a very powerful tool for those who need to keep in touch with their loved ones, it should be made aware people that human relationship is very important in order to be able to have feelings that are about to disappear, such as respect, kindness, compassion and more.

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