Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

GOVERNMENTS SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON RAILWAYS RATHER THAN ROADS

GOVERNMENTS SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON RAILWAYS RATHER THAN ROADS m3J8K
We are able to recognize that in recent years governments have spent plenty of money on roads trying to improve the traffic in different cities. However, we can notice how this purpose has not been achieved in all places, so another option could be constructing railways. This essay will examine this perspective. Firstly, railways are an available option to replace other means of transport. In current times, there are many locations around the world where exists an overcrowded population. This means that sometimes it is difficult to succeed only with roads because nowadays each family have at least one car. Secondly, another advantage of this transport is the quantity of people that could use it. In other words, if there are railways in a city, the amount of cars will be lower. Moreover, it could be seen how another problem will be improved due to the decrease of the contamination that the vehicles produce. On the other hand, it is truthful that the process to built railways could be complicated because the construction of them implies demolishing many roads that they had created before. Nevertheless, it is not unimaginable that only the procedure could be extensive. In conclusion, there is no doub that creating railways rather than roads is a challenge for governments and it is easier for them to take other types of measures. However, I believe they should considerate in this option because the effort will be seen in the future due to the improvement in the traffic and the decrease in the environmental pollution.
We are able to recognize that in recent years
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
have spent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of money on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
trying to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the traffic in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
cities.
However
, we can notice how this purpose has not
been achieved
in all places,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
another option could be constructing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
railways
. This essay will examine this perspective.

Firstly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
railways
are an available option to replace
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
means of transport. In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
times, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
locations around the world where exists an overcrowded population. This means that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
it is difficult to succeed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
nowadays each family have at least one car.

Secondly
, another advantage of this transport is the quantity of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
that could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it. In
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
words, if there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
railways
in a city, the amount of cars will be
Did you mean "lowed", "lowered"?
lower
.
Moreover
, it could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
how another problem will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
due to the decrease of the contamination that the vehicles produce.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, it is truthful that the process to built
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
railways
could
be complicated
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the construction of them implies demolishing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
that they had created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
.
Nevertheless
, it is not unimaginable that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the procedure could be extensive.

In conclusion
, there is no
Possible spelling mistake found.
doub that
creating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
railways
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
is a challenge for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
and it is easier for them to take
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
types of measures.
However
, I believe they
It seems that a verb or adverb has been misspelled or is missing here.
should considerate
in this option
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the effort will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in the future due to the improvement in the traffic and the decrease in the environmental pollution.

IELTS academic GOVERNMENTS SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON RAILWAYS RATHER THAN ROADS

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
257 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • GOVERNMENTS SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON RAILWAYS RATHER THAN ROADS