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The charts below show total number of internet users and internet shopping in Europe.

The charts below show total number of internet users and internet shopping in Europe. nXQMP

The provided charts illustrate the information about total figure of internet users and internet shopping in Europe from 1995 to 2004 and data has been calibrated in millions. Overview, UK had a top priority of internet users in all years, whereas inviduals in Spain were more passionate towards the internet shopping. It is interesting to note that in 1995, the internet users in France surpassed the Switzerland but left behind by internet users in Germany. However, internet users in 2004 were two fold of 2000 in Switzerland. After that, there was a slight difference between the internet users in Germany in 2000 and 2004. The internet users in 2000 was 3 million and it was rose by 3 million in 2004. Afterwards, the internet users in Spain was 0. 5, 0. 7 and 2 million between 1995 and 2004 respectively. It is interesting to note that the internet users in UK in 1995 accounting for 16 million. However, the internet users in 2000 was less than a quarter in UK and in 2004 the internet users was accounted for more than one fourth. Moreover the maximum individuals of UK preferred internet shopping which was followed by Spain. The internet shopping preferred by people in Germany was on the par with France. Users of internet shopping in Switzerland stood at 5%.

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