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The line graphs illustrate some trends by two groups, UK residents and overseas residents, in visits to and from the UK and the average length of their stay, from 1982 to 2002. The main trend, as shown in the first graph, indicates a constant rise of visits over the years by UK residents, starting with a number 20 million visitors in 1982 that reaches a peak of 60 million in 2002. On the other hand, the average number of visitors to the UK from overseas residents remained stable/didn’t experience such a significant rise, since it started with 10 million visitors in 1982, a number that slowly increased to 20 million in 1992 and 25 million in 2002. The second graph considered the two groups’ average length of stay and it shows that both had experienced a general decrease in night's stay. UK residents generally stayed 13 nights until 1990, after that the trend decreased to 12 to finally stabilize to 10 nights in 2002. Overseas residents experienced a more significant and constant downward trend: starting with 11 nights, it reached the number of 9 nights in 2002. To conclude, from the analysis of both graphs one must conclude that the number of UK citizens travelling abroad was always higher than the number of foreign visitors in UK; the same can be stated regarding the number of nights spent abroad: UK residents used to stay abroad more than foreign travellers in the UK.
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by two groups, UK
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residents
and overseas
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residents
, in visits to and from the UK and the average length of their
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stay
, from 1982 to 2002.

The main
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trend
, as shown in the
first
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graph
, indicates a constant rise of visits over the years by UK
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residents
, starting with a
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number
20
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million
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visitors
in 1982 that reaches a peak of 60
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million
in 2002.
On the other hand
, the average
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number
of
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visitors
to the UK from overseas
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residents
remained stable/didn’t experience such a significant rise, since it
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started
with 10
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million
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visitors
in 1982, a
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that
slowly
increased to 20
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million
in 1992 and 25
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million
in 2002.

The second
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considered the two groups’ average length of
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and it
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that both had experienced a general decrease in night's
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stay
. UK
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generally
stayed 13
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nights
until 1990, after that the
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decreased to 12 to
finally
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nights
in 2002. Overseas
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experienced a more significant and constant downward
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: starting with 11
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nights
, it reached the
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nights
in 2002.

To conclude
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of UK citizens travelling abroad was always higher than the
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number
of foreign
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visitors
in UK; the same can
be stated
regarding the
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number
of
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nights
spent abroad: UK
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residents
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used
to
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abroad more than foreign
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travellers
in the UK.
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