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Global population % and Distribution of wealth by region

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The chart illustrates the amount of people in eight different regions and the total wealth shares in that regions. It shows that some regions have more population than the total wealth in the country while some have more money than the total population. North America being the highest in the ratio has 6% of population and seven times the wealth shares of total population with 36%. Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific regions are the two having wealth ratio higher than population with Europe at 15% population and 29% wealth shares and Rich Asia-Pacific at 5% and 24% respectively. Latin America adnd Caribbean, Africa, India, China and Other Asia-Pacific have more population than total wealth. China has 22% of population and 2% of wealth shares. Other Asia-Pacific region has 17% of people and 3% of total wealth. India and Africa have the same wealth share of 1% with 15% and 10% of total population. Consequently, it can seen that some countries have higher man power than the total luxuries and some have vice versa.
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