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Given table illustrate Forest area in seven different region of the word in million hectors from 1990 to 2005 with 5 years of interval.

Given table illustrate Forest area in seven different region of the word in million hectors from 1990 to 2005 with 5 years of interval. WmWpb
Given table illustrate Forest area in seven different region of the word in million hectors from 1990 to 2005 with 5 years of interval. Going in more details, For both Africa and South america has seen more deforestaison from 1990 to 2005 with 40 million hector area reduse in 1990 while 80 million hectoe reduse in 2000 to 2005 in Africa. Nearly same milion hector area decreased in south America from 946 to 904 in 2000 and 904 to 882 in 2005. However Asia and Europe has groon more trees from 1990 to 2005, thay have 576 and 989 million hectars forest area respectively, Which increases to 570 in 2000 and further increases to 584 in 2005. Also, Europe increases its total green area 10 milion heactor in 15 years. While other remaning countries both North America and Oceania has fluction on its total green area North America's forest reduce by 5 melion hector in 2000 whith compare to 1990 and maintain this figure in 2005. On the other hand Forest area increases in 2000 but in 2005 it decrese further io Oceania. to sum-up, Total forest area across the globe is reduced from 2034 to 2013 million hector whith in 15 years.
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Forest
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area
in seven
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different
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region
of the word in
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million
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hectors
from 1990 to 2005 with 5 years of interval.

Going in more
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details
, For both Africa and
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South america
has
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seen
more
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deforestaison
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million
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hector
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area
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reduse
in 1990 while 80
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million
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hectoe
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reduse
in 2000 to 2005 in Africa.
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same
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milion
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hector
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decreased in
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south America
from 946 to 904 in 2000 and 904 to 882 in 2005.
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Asia and Europe has
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more trees from 1990 to 2005,
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thay
have 576 and 989
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million
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hectars
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forest
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area
respectively
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increases
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further
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increases
to 584 in 2005.
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, Europe
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increases
its total green
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area
10
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milion
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heactor
in 15 years. While other
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remaning
countries both North America and Oceania has
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on its total green
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North America's
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forest
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by 5
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melion
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hector
in 2000
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whith
compare to 1990 and maintain this figure in 2005.
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increases
in 2000
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in 2005 it
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decrese
further
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io
Oceania.

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to
sum-up, Total
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forest
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area
across the globe is
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reduced
from 2034 to 2013
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million
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hector
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whith
in 15 years.

IELTS academic Given table illustrate Forest area in seven different region of the word in million hectors from 1990 to 2005 with 5 years of interval.

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