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Household income on food and drink, housing, clothing.

Household income on food and drink, housing, clothing. 3WN7d
The pie charts compare the percentage of electricity generated in four countries from various sources, namely fossil fuel, Hydro power, nuclear power in the year 2003. Overall, what stands out from the charts is that Vietnam and Morocco did not use nuclear power for electricity production. It can also be been that while fossil fuel was the largest source of electricity supply in Vietnam and India, it only occupied a marginal proportion in the other countries during examined years. looking at the details, in India, 82% of the total amount of electricity was from fossil fuel, closely followed by Vietnam with 56%, while the figure of Morocco was 5%, even Sweden at only 4%. By contrast, nuclear power made up 44% in Sweden, whereas almost very little in other countries, especially Vietnam and Morocco. In terms of Hydro power, Morocco came top of countries generating hydroelectric occupying 95%, ranked second was Sweden with 52%. Additionally, the percentage of hydro power was approximately a half of Vietnam’s chart. However, little Hydroelectricity was produced by in India
The pie charts compare the percentage of
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generated in four
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countries
from various sources,
namely
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power
, nuclear
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power
in the year 2003.

Overall
, what stands out from the charts is that Vietnam and Morocco did not
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use
nuclear
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power
for
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electricity
production. It can
also
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that while fossil fuel was the largest source of
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electricity
supply in Vietnam and India, it
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only
occupied a marginal proportion in the other
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countries
during examined years.

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looking
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details
, in India, 82% of the total amount of
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electricity
was from fossil fuel,
closely
followed by Vietnam with 56%, while the figure of Morocco was 5%, even Sweden at
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only
4%. By contrast, nuclear
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power
made up 44% in Sweden, whereas almost
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very
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in other
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countries
,
especially
Vietnam and Morocco.

In terms of Hydro
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power
, Morocco came top of
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countries
generating hydroelectric occupying 95%, ranked second was Sweden with 52%.
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power
was approximately a half of Vietnam’s chart.
However
,
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Hydroelectricity
was produced
by in India

IELTS academic Household income on food and drink, housing, clothing.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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