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The graph shows the traffic growth in the. Netherlands since 1950

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The traffic growth in the Netherlands From1950 to 2000 has been shows by line graph. Overall, it is lucid that the traffic by car was at peak level among other three transports. while, traffic by public transport was few. To begin with, car was highly used by public due to this traffic by this transport was raising with the passage of years. however, in 1950 it was 0 percent, but in 2000 it reached at 0 to 140 percent. Another transport system which was train. The traffic growth by this only 20 percent. The growing percentage by this was least owing to mostly people prefers to travel by their own vehicle. Moving further, people believes that bicycle is time consuming and slow speed vehicle. Due to this they gave less preference to use this. Hence, the traffic growth by this below 20 percent. After that, public transport which provided by government. The growth of traffic by this was in between 0 to 20 percent. Which was least among others such as car, train as well as bicycle.
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by car was at peak level among other three
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by public
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was raising with the passage of years.
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in 2000 it reached at 0 to 140
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system which was train. The
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