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Friendship is the most valuable relationship in the life of a person instead of having many important things in life. No one of us has a complete and satisfied life if we lack faithful friendship

Friendship is the most valuable relationship in the life of a person instead of having many important things in life. No one of us has a complete and satisfied life if we lack faithful friendship M31yQ
Friendship is the most valuable relationship in the life of a person instead of having many important things in life. No one of us has a complete and satisfied life if we lack faithful friendship. Everyone needs a good and loyal friend to share bad or good life events, enjoy happy moments and share unbearable events of the life. A good and balanced human interaction is very necessary for the survival of everyone. Good friends share each other’s emotions or sentiments which bring feeling of well-being and mental satisfaction. A friend is a person whom one can know deeply, like and trust forever. Instead of being some similarity in the nature of two persons involved in the friendship, they have some different traits but they need each other without changing their uniqueness. Generally, friends motivate each other without criticizing but sometimes good friends criticize to bring some positive changes in each other.
Friendship is the most valuable relationship in the
life
of a person
instead
of having
many
important
things in
life
. No one of us has a complete and satisfied
life
if we lack faithful friendship. Everyone needs a
good
and loyal
friend
to share
bad
or
good
life
events
, enjoy happy moments and share unbearable
events
of the
life
. A
good
and balanced human interaction is
very
necessary for the survival of everyone.
Good
friends
share each
other’s
emotions or sentiments which bring feeling of well-being and mental satisfaction. A
friend
is a person whom one can know
deeply
, like and trust forever.
Instead
of being
some
similarity in the nature of two persons involved in the friendship, they have
some
different
traits
but
they need each
other
without changing their uniqueness.
Generally
,
friends
motivate each
other
without criticizing
but
sometimes
good
friends
criticize to bring
some
positive
changes
in each
other
.
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IELTS academic Friendship is the most valuable relationship in the life of a person instead of having many important things in life. No one of us has a complete and satisfied life if we lack faithful friendship

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1 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
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