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Fifty years from now, life will be more challenging for ordinary people than it is today.

Fifty years from now, life will be more challenging for ordinary people than it is today. lLleK
Fifty years from now, life will be more challenging for ordinary people than it is today. Although the development progress brings a lot of benefits to people’s lives, it runs counter to the improvement of normal people’s quality of life. In the future, the value of goods and services will be increase because the demand of people is raised day by day. For instance, the poverty people in the next fifty years have been presented that they will not have enough budget to afford their life such as accommodations and meals, and will be in a tight corner due to lack of money according to The US Citizens' newspaper. In addition, the raising of residents also contributes to the challenge of people. There will be an increase in the unemployment rate due to the crowded population and leads to redundancy in the workforce. This situation not only reduces the standard of living for many people, but it also has an underlying motive for a rise in social problems, such as crime, homeless people, and poverty. In conclusion, there will be more difficulties for ordinary residents in the next five decades and they should find solutions to solve these problems now.
Fifty years from
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, life will be more challenging for ordinary
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people
than it is
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today
. Although the development progress brings
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a lot of
benefits to
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people’s
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lives
, it runs counter to the improvement of normal
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people’s
quality of life. In the future, the value of
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goods
and services will be increase
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because
the demand of
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people
is raised
day by day.
For instance
, the poverty
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people
in the
next
fifty years have
been presented
that they will not have
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enough
budget to afford their life such as accommodations and meals, and will be in a tight corner due to lack of money according to The US Citizens' newspaper.
In addition
, the raising of residents
also
contributes to the challenge of
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people
. There will be an increase in the unemployment rate due to the crowded population and leads to redundancy in the workforce. This situation not
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only
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reduces
the standard of living for
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many
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people
,
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but
it
also
has an underlying motive for a rise in social problems, such as crime, homeless
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people
, and poverty.
In conclusion
, there will be more difficulties for ordinary residents in the
next
five
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decades and
they should find solutions to solve these problems
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IELTS academic Fifty years from now, life will be more challenging for ordinary people than it is today.

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