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Faster road between Se 84th and 85th Avenue before and after installation of wider sidewalks,a new crossing,bicycle lines and street trees.

Faster road between Se 84th and 85th Avenue before and after installation of wider sidewalks, a new crossing, bicycle lines and street trees. dolYp

The diagram shows proposals to transform Foster Road between SE 84th and 85th Avenue into a tree-lined avenue that is safer for pedestrians and cyclists. First of all, the planners propose to widen the sidewalk on both sides of the road and add bicycle lanes. This will mean reducing the number of lanes for cars and other vehicles. A pedestrian crossing will also be installed at the lower end of the street, near the gas station. This crossing will include an island in the middle where people can wait in safety. In addition to the safety measures above, planners also want to plant trees along both sides of the road. These trees will transform the appearance of the neighbourhood as well as provide vital extra shade for pedestrians. To summarise, under these proposals, the needs of local residents will be better served by making Foster Road a safer and more pleasant environment.

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 proposals to transform Foster You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 between SE 84th and 85th Avenue

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into
 a tree-lined avenue that is
 safer for pedestrians and cyclists.

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First of all
, the planners propose to widen the sidewalk on both sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
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add


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBicycle
bicycle
 lanes. This will mean reducing the number of lanes for cars and other vehicles. A

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPedestrian
pedestrian
 crossing will also
be installed
 at the lower This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the street, near the gas station.

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people
 can wait in safety.

In addition
 to the safety measures above, planners also
 want to plant trees along both sides

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 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
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. These trees will transform the appearance of the Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
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provide
 vital extra shade for pedestrians.

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summarise
, under these proposals, the needs of local residents will be better served by

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making
 Foster You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 a safer and more pleasant environment. 