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explain graphs about the tourist attraction facility

explain graphs about the tourist attraction facility 7a36A

The two maps highlight the condition of an island before and after the addition of modern tourist facilities. Overall, there were only a beach and forest scenes to enjoy for the visitors. However, many attractions were added after the renovation work, like accommodation, restaurants, swimming facility. Looking more closely at the maps, before the construction work there were only a few trees and a beach on the left side of the island with no swimming facility. However, after that many facilities and attractions were added to the visitors. First of all, the swimming opportunity was added for the tourists alongside the beach. Moreover accommodations and footpaths were added all along the island to help visitors walk through the island and have a comfortable stay. A pier was also included alongside with the vehicle track which can guide the tourist vehicles to the newly build facilities of reception and restaurant on the island.

The two maps highlight the condition of an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after the addition of modern tourist facilities. Overall
, there were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a beach and forest scenes to enjoy for the visitors. However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 attractions were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
added
 after the renovation work, like accommodation, restaurants, swimming facility.

Looking more closely
 at the maps, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the construction work there were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a few trees and a beach on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 with no swimming facility. However
, after that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 facilities and attractions were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
added
 to the visitors. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the swimming opportunity was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
added
 for the tourists alongside the beach. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 accommodations and footpaths were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
added
 all along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 visitors walk through the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 and have a comfortable stay. A pier was also
 included alongside with the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 which can guide the tourist vehicles to the newly
 build facilities of reception and restaurant on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. 