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Given pie chart represent the production, consumption and transportation of coffee .

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The given three pie charts reveals the data about the coffee production, consumption and also issue the information of transportation of the profit from it in different sectors. overall, it is clearly seen that the first and second pie charts the South Africa is a major producer of the coffeine and Europeans and Americans drink the highest amount of cappuccino. Looking comprehensively in the given table chart, In first chart, the South Africa produce maximum coffee which is about 44% and Indonesia produces half of it that 22%. Whereas, Japan and Vietnam harvest 18% and 16% espresso respectively. In second chart, Europe is the major country for consumption of cappuccino about 41% and USA is second major country for consumption by 39%. The rest of the world consumes only 12%. However, japanese consumes least proportion of coffee which is 8%. Further analysing in the given table chart regerously, In final sector, The transportation of coffee in market earns maximum profit. Moreover, the retailers earn half of the total profit nearly a quarter. 15% and 10% profit earned by producers and euporters. The given three pie charts reveals the data about the coffee production, consumption and also issue the information of transportation of the profit from it in different sectors. overall, it is clearly seen that the first and second pie charts the South Africa is a major producer of the coffeine and Europeans and Americans drink the highest amount of cappuccino. Looking comprehensively in the given table chart, In first chart, the South Africa produce maximum coffee which is about 44% and Indonesia produces half of it that 22%. Whereas, Japan and Vietnam harvest 18% and 16% espresso respectively. In second chart, Europe is the major country for consumption of cappuccino about 41% and USA is second major country for consumption by 39%. The rest of the world consumes only 12%. However, japanese consumes least proportion of coffee which is 8%. Further analysing in the given table chart regerously, In final sector, The transportation of coffee in market earns maximum profit. Moreover, the retailers earn half of the total profit nearly a quarter. 15% and 10% profit earned by producers and euporters.
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IELTS academic Given pie chart represent the production, consumption and transportation of coffee.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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