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The map shows the development of an area from 1962 to present today.

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Given maps describe about the enormous changes happened to a particular area from 1965 to present days. Overall, it can be seen that meadoside, which was a tiny village become established as a suburb with a lot of infrastructural developments over the time frame. Firstly, in 1965 this area included meadoside village with a small road intersecting through the midline and adjuscently another area called 'Fonton', with a railway line. In 1985 the village road has developed to a high way which bifurcated at the centre of the village and extent ed to Fonton. A housing estate and a super store has been built on either sides of the road. In addition a leasure complex also added to the village on the left side of highway. In last phase, an exponential growth happened to village to develop as a suburb, obviously plethora of additions and extentions took place. The village joined with Fonton province to become a single part and an additional railway line connecting with the previous line has estabilished with a railway station in the centre of the area. A huge business Park was developed in the southern portion and a hotel on the north side also added to the infrastructure.
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describe
about the enormous
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changes
happened to a particular
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area
from 1965 to present days.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that
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meadoside
, which was a tiny
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village
become established as a suburb with
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a lot of
infrastructural developments over the time frame.

Firstly
, in 1965 this
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area
included
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meadoside
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village
with a
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small
road intersecting through the midline and
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adjuscently
another
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area
called '
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Fonton
', with a railway line. In 1985 the
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village
road has developed to a high way which bifurcated at the
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centre
of the
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village
and extent ed to
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Fonton
. A housing estate and a super store has
been built
on either sides of the road. In
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addition
a
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leasure
complex
also
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added
to the
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village
on the
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left
side of highway.

In last phase, an exponential growth happened to
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village
to develop as a suburb,
obviously
plethora of additions and
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extentions
took place. The
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village
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joined
with
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Fonton
province to become a single part and an additional railway line connecting with the previous line has
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estabilished
with a railway station in the
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centre
of the
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area
. A huge business Park
was developed
in the southern portion and a hotel on the north side
also
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added
to the infrastructure.
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IELTS academic The map shows the development of an area from 1962 to present today.

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