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Describing Location for IELTS Maps

Describing Location for IELTS Maps 96np0

There are two maps depicting a university sports centre before and after a period of redevelopment. There are some parts that will remain the same and others that will be completely altered, and the total area of the sports centre will be increased significantly. At the centre of the sports centre is a 25-metre swimming pool, surrounded by a seating area and a changing room, with a reception desk between it and the entrance. These features have not changed between the first map and the second. However, the gym, which sits behind the swimming pool, has been substantially expanded, and in the second map it is approximately twice the size it originally was. To the east of the gym, two dance studios have been added in the second map, and to the west there is now a large leisure pool. At the front of the building, near the reception, there are two additional changing rooms, as well as a sports shop and café.

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maps
 depicting a university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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centre
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after a period of redevelopment. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 parts that will remain the same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
 that will be completely altered, and the total area of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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centre
 will be increased
significantly
.

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centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 is a The word '25-metre' is an adjective (SI unit of measurement), but the spelling is not correct American English.
25-metre
 swimming pool, surrounded by a seating area and a changing room, with a reception desk between it and the entrance. These features have not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 between the first
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map
 and the second. However
, the gym, which sits behind the swimming pool, has been substantially
 expanded, and in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 it is approximately twice the size it originally
 was. To the east of the gym, two dance studios have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
, and to the west there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a large leisure pool. At the front of the building, near the reception, there are two additional changing rooms, as well
 as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shop and café. 