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Describing Location for IELTS Maps

Describing Location for IELTS Maps 96np0
There are two maps depicting a university sports centre before and after a period of redevelopment. There are some parts that will remain the same and others that will be completely altered, and the total area of the sports centre will be increased significantly. At the centre of the sports centre is a 25-metre swimming pool, surrounded by a seating area and a changing room, with a reception desk between it and the entrance. These features have not changed between the first map and the second. However, the gym, which sits behind the swimming pool, has been substantially expanded, and in the second map it is approximately twice the size it originally was. To the east of the gym, two dance studios have been added in the second map, and to the west there is now a large leisure pool. At the front of the building, near the reception, there are two additional changing rooms, as well as a sports shop and café.
There are two
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maps
depicting a university
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sports
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centre
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before
and after a period of redevelopment. There are
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some
parts that will remain the same
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and others
that will be completely altered, and the total area of the
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sports
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centre
will
be increased
significantly
.

At the
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centre
of the
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sports
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centre
is a
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25-metre
swimming pool, surrounded by a seating area and a changing room, with a reception desk between it and the entrance. These features have not
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changed
between the
first
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map
and the second.
However
, the gym, which sits behind the swimming pool, has been
substantially
expanded, and in the second
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map
it is approximately twice the size it
originally
was. To the east of the gym, two dance studios have been
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added
in the second
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map
, and to the west there is
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now
a large leisure pool. At the front of the building, near the reception, there are two additional changing rooms,
as well
as a
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sports
shop and café.

IELTS academic Describing Location for IELTS Maps

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
163 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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