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The bar chart compares the number of Japanese tourists that traveled abroad over 10 years between 1985 and 1995.

The bar chart compares the number of Japanese tourists that traveled abroad over 10 years between 1985 and 1995. DYDRp

The bar chart compares the number of Japanese tourists that traveled abroad over 10 years between 1985 and 1995. Meanwhile, the line graph reveals the number of Japanese citizens that chose Australia as their destination. Looking at the details, the percentage of Japanese travelers increased constantly until the year 1991. By 1991 and 1993, the positive trends reversed and tourist figures slightly dropped compared to the previous year. Tourism decreased from around 11 million people to 10. 5 million in 1991, and from 12 million to approximately 11. 9 by the year 1993. However, the total number of tourists doubled between the commencement and the end of the period in 1985 and 1995. According to the data, Australia has historically registered an increase in the market share of Japan’s tourism. The number of Japanese citizens that visited Australia exponentially grew between 1985 and 1989, just before reporting an abrupt fall of around 1% in 1990. After experiencing the lowest percentage of Japan’s tourist market share in 1990, Australia´s population as a tourist destination recovered. The number of tourists in Australia escalated by approximately 1% annually until 1994, when figures softly decreased to 6%. Overall, the total number of Japanese tourists traveling outside their country increased over the years. In addition, looking at the big picture, statistics show that almost every year more Japanese people chose to visit Australia.

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