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Describe the road from hospital

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The given maps illustrate how the city hospital can be accessed via road in the years 2007 and 2010 Overall, there has been significant structural developments with th addition of separate public and statt car parking area, which did not exist in 2007 / Furthermore, two round abouts have been introduced along with a bus station. 2007, city hospital is situated at the end of Hospital Road which runs from south to North Multiple bus stops are located on the either side of the road, along with a common cor pork service, for both staff and public. The carp car park is situated at the By the year 2010, the common park has been converted to only staff car park with the introduction of public park in the towards East of the Hospital. Two roundabouts Development of two round abouts have made navigation easier as it both connects to a common bus station
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maps illustrate how the city
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hospital
can
be accessed
via road in the years 2007 and 2010

Overall
, there has been significant structural developments with
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addition of separate public and
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car parking area, which did not exist in 2007 /
Furthermore
, two round
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abouts have
been introduced
along with a bus station.

2007, city
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hospital
is situated
at the
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end
of
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Hospital
Road which runs from south to North Multiple bus
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stops
are located
on the either side of the road, along with a common cor pork service, for both staff and public. The carp car
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park
is situated
at the

By the year 2010, the common
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park
has
been converted
to
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only
staff car
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park
with the

introduction of public
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park
in the towards East of the
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Hospital
. Two roundabouts Development of two round
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abouts have
made navigation easier
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as
it both connects to a common bus
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station
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IELTS academic Describe the road from hospital

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  American English
2 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
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