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According to the graph and the table, we can see how the proportion of people change between 1950 and 2055 in Japan. Overall, it is clear that until 2005, the total amount of citizens has followed an upward pattern which is going to end in 2015. However, people over 65, instead of decreasing in 2035, they are going to rocket. To begin, the ratio of total citizens was accounted for almost 84 million people in 1950, of which 4. 9% was for the elder population. This data grew moderately until reaching 127 million in 2005 when the rate remained stable with fewer fluctuations during 30 years. Besides, the rate of old people followed the same path and increased to more than 25 million, which was equivalent to 20% of the total. The most noticeable change will be in 2035 when the rate of Japan population will witness a considerably decrease until the 110 million; however, the percentage of people over 65 will have rose by more than 10%. In 2055, there will be nearly 90 millions of Japanese in the world and more than 40% of them would be over 65.

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