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Crop production in Victoria in 2018

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The given pie chart shows information on the crop production in Victoria in the year 2018. Overall, the fraction of wheat illustrates the highest proportion in crop production whereas sugar is the least responsible for it. Additionally, the three fractions of wheat, cotton and rice do not differentiate gradually much from each other in the crop production Wheat recorded the highest level of proportion with 23, 2 percent followed by Cotton with 21, 1 percent and rice with 20, 8 percent. Corn was only responsible with 18, 5 percent after it Barley on 9, 4 percent. Sugar reached the bottom in the comparisons with 7. 0 percent. Wheat, cotton or Rice had more of an impact on the crop production even if Sugar and Barley are put together. The three proportions of cotton, wheat and rice made up in cooperation nearly three-quarters on the crop production. Furthermore, the percentages of sugar and Barley did not made together even 20 percent.
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production
in Victoria in the year 2018.

Overall
, the fraction of
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wheat
illustrates the highest proportion in
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crop
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production
whereas
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sugar
is the least responsible for it.
Additionally
, the three fractions of
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wheat
, cotton and
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rice
do not differentiate
gradually
much from each other in the
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crop
production

Wheat recorded the highest level of proportion with 23, 2
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percent
followed by Cotton with 21, 1
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percent
and
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rice
with 20, 8
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percent
. Corn was
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only
responsible with 18, 5
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after it
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Barley
on 9, 4
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.
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Sugar
reached the bottom in the comparisons with 7. 0
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percent
.
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Wheat
, cotton or
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Rice
had more of an impact on the
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crop
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production
even if
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Sugar
and Barley
are put
together. The three proportions of cotton,
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wheat
and
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rice
made up in cooperation
nearly
three-quarters on the
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crop
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production
.
Furthermore
, the percentages of
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sugar
and Barley did not
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made
together even 20
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percent
.
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IELTS academic Crop production in Victoria in 2018

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6.5
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