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Crochet as a hobby and a living

Crochet as a hobby and a living Wg7oK
My name is Nadia, I am fond of crafting. When I had a lot of free time in India I discovered new hobbies - crocheting and knitting. I learned to crochet everything starting from kids toys to accessories. Recently I found out it is possible to decorate streets with crochet graffiti. I hope these toys would bring joy to you and your family this Christmas. My name is Nadia, I am fond of crafting. When I had a lot of free time in India I discovered new hobbies - crocheting and knitting. I learned to crochet everything starting from kids toys to accessories. Recently I found out it is possible to decorate streets with crochet graffiti. I hope these toys would bring joy to you and your family this Christmas.
My name is Nadia, I am fond of crafting. When I had
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a lot of
free time in India I discovered new hobbies
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crocheting and knitting. I learned to
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crochet
everything starting from kids
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toys
to accessories. Recently I found out it is possible to decorate streets with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crochet
graffiti. I hope these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
toys
would bring joy to you and your family this Christmas. My name is Nadia, I am fond of crafting. When I had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
free time in India I discovered new hobbies
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
crocheting and knitting. I learned to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crochet
everything starting from kids
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
toys
to accessories. Recently I found out it is possible to decorate streets with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crochet
graffiti. I hope these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
toys
would bring joy to you and your family this Christmas.
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IELTS academic Crochet as a hobby and a living

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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