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The given line chart illustrates global water usage in three sectors which are agriculture, industrial use and domestic usage from 1900 to 2000. Units are measured by Km3. Overall, Agriculture shows rapid growth than other sectors between 1900 to 2000. In terms of, Agriculture industry they have reached their peak during the past few years. Starting from the year 1900 they have used somewhat more than 500km3 of water. there has been a gradual growth in the year 1900 to 1940 before it started to increase exponentially. when there's a huge increase in the agriculture field there is less amount of water usage in the domestic sector whereas, industrial use shows somewhat a growth after the 1940s. On the other hand, the industrial and domestic sector shows the same amount of water usage during the 1900s to 1940s. even though those sectors showed similarities when using water during those years the industrial sector has been showing quick growth after the 1940s when domestic usage still goes with gradual growth.
The
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given
line chart illustrates global
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water
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usage
in three
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sectors
which are
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agriculture
,
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industrial
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use
and
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domestic
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usage
from 1900 to 2000. Units
are measured
by Km3.

Overall
,
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Agriculture
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shows
rapid
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growth
than other
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sectors
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between 1900 to 2000
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In terms of,
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Agriculture
industry they have reached their peak during the past few years. Starting from the
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1900 they have
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used
somewhat more than 500km3 of
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water
.
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there
has been a gradual
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growth
in the
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1900 to 1940
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before
it
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to increase
exponentially
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when
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field there is less amount of
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water
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usage
in the
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domestic
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whereas,
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industrial
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use
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somewhat a
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growth
after the 1940s.

On the other hand
, the
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industrial
and
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domestic
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sector
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the same amount of
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during the 1900s to 1940s.
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even
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showed
similarities when using
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during those years the
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industrial
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has been showing quick
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growth
after the 1940s when
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domestic
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still
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growth
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IELTS academic Construction in front of your house

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169 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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