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The bar graph elucidated the cognizance apropos that cause education among pupils of various age groups in career and in interests. The data has been calibrated in age-groups. At fist glance, it is clearly noticeable that the percentage of learners are given on y-axis of the graph and the age groups are given on the x-axis of the group. In case of career, pupils under the age of 26, the figure is at 80% which starts declining the percentage learners and reaches at 15% who are above the age of 49. Along with, the scholars under the age-group of 26-29 and 30-39 with 70% and 60% respectively. Moving further, in case of intrigue, the reasons for education under 26 age of apprentice is at 10% which starts surging from the age group of 26-29 to 30-39 with nearly 15% and 20% correspondingly and reaches at 70% with the age group who are over 49. After scrutinizing the whole data, it can be said the rigor touches the lowest point in interest under the age-group of 26 and downward trend can be noticed in case of career throughout the given period.

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