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Car ownership in Canada; how many citizens owns one car or more

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The supplied Pie chart illustrates information regarding the mature canadian car holders and defined them, according to their volume of four wheelers. Overall, most of the individuals as one car, while a small proportion of them do not own it. Commencing with middle age people who have one car, the amount of them is higher than rest of them, they own significant proportion, which is almost more than half of total population of them. On the other hand, a little less than quarter of canadian adults do not have any four wheeler vehicle. Categorically speaking about youngsters, who have two cars or more then it. First and foremost, plethoras of them have ownership of two cars, almost a quarter, whilst The number of holders who have more than 2 four-wheelers are in smaller amount approximately 5 to 10 ratio of pie chart.
The supplied Pie chart illustrates information regarding the mature
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canadian
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car
holders and defined them, according to their volume of four
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wheelers
.

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, most of the individuals as one
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car
, while a
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small
proportion of them do not
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own
it.

Commencing with middle age
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people
who have one
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car
, the amount of them is higher than rest of them, they
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own
significant proportion, which is almost more than half of total population of them.
On the other hand
, a
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little
less than quarter of
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canadian
adults do not have any four wheeler vehicle.

Categorically
speaking about youngsters, who have two
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cars
or more
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then
it.
First
and foremost,
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plethoras
of them have ownership of two
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cars
, almost a quarter, whilst The number of holders who have more than 2
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four-wheelers
are in smaller amount approximately 5 to 10
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ratio
of pie chart.
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IELTS academic Car ownership in Canada; how many citizens owns one car or more

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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